Throughout this assignment I learned a lot. There was a lot about what could affect gender that I never considered before. As I was reading the article I realized that hook up apps majorly affect gender roles. Also, it was very interesting to read how feminism was such a big deal and that popping that question could majorly affect their careers. As I completed the reading logs I was amazed at the more and more information I was gathering from the article that I had never realized after reading the first time.
When I was attempting to compose a thesis statement, it was very difficult. I was struggling on how to make a thesis statement that would work together with both articles. Then I started brainstorming how each article's topics could effect each other and how they have common ground. This helped me create a thesis that fit with the topic and both articles. After researching this topic, I have a better understanding on what each topic means. I also learned about how to find good middle ground while stating your own opinion at the dame time.
According to my peer review the strength of my essay is the organization. While I revise this essay it is recommended that I add in more quotes and examples from the articles. Before writing the draft I outlined everything I wanted to cover in the essay. This helped me to great organization through out the text. While revising I will make sure to strengthen my points by referring to the articles. Professor Benander will probably like the organization of this essay.
The essay turned out great. I got a very high grade and I like how smoothly the essay reads. As we approach Essay 4 I will definitely work a lot harder on making sure that I have strong foundation with references to the articles that are affiliated with my topic. Overall, I am proud of my essay and the grade that I received.
When I was attempting to compose a thesis statement, it was very difficult. I was struggling on how to make a thesis statement that would work together with both articles. Then I started brainstorming how each article's topics could effect each other and how they have common ground. This helped me create a thesis that fit with the topic and both articles. After researching this topic, I have a better understanding on what each topic means. I also learned about how to find good middle ground while stating your own opinion at the dame time.
According to my peer review the strength of my essay is the organization. While I revise this essay it is recommended that I add in more quotes and examples from the articles. Before writing the draft I outlined everything I wanted to cover in the essay. This helped me to great organization through out the text. While revising I will make sure to strengthen my points by referring to the articles. Professor Benander will probably like the organization of this essay.
The essay turned out great. I got a very high grade and I like how smoothly the essay reads. As we approach Essay 4 I will definitely work a lot harder on making sure that I have strong foundation with references to the articles that are affiliated with my topic. Overall, I am proud of my essay and the grade that I received.