My main idea for this essay is determining the most effective way for marketing in today's business world. In this essay I learned that I need to improve on my quotes and explanations for each one. Although each quote is not the best explained, by the end of this assignment, I will have greatly improved on my quotations and explanations. Each time that I do summarize or paraphrase I make note of the article and author as I would not want to give the impression that it is my own work.
In everything mentioned I provide details for why it is mentioned and explain what it has to do with my topic. I am satisfied with my introduction as it is sufficient for each point that will be discussed in the essay. [Insert "Are you satisfied with your conclusion"]. While grammar and punctuation has never been a problem for me, there are always few little errors that I am working hard to find and correct.
The peer review was extremely helpful to me and shows me things that I need to improve on and strengths in my essay. My peer reader really liked my introduction and how it foreshadowed the rest of the draft. Fortunately, my peer review reader did not get confused during my essay and liked the organization and wording of my essay. My reader recommended that I add a few more paragraphs and use more quotations from my article readings.
The strong points in my essay are my introduction and the layout of the writing. The weak points of my essay are direct references to my readings. To help improve this, as I read my essay through I will add in quotes from the articles that strongly support the point I am portraying to my audience. When professor Benander reads my essay I predict that she will recommend more paragraphs for each point to help better explain each one.
In everything mentioned I provide details for why it is mentioned and explain what it has to do with my topic. I am satisfied with my introduction as it is sufficient for each point that will be discussed in the essay. [Insert "Are you satisfied with your conclusion"]. While grammar and punctuation has never been a problem for me, there are always few little errors that I am working hard to find and correct.
The peer review was extremely helpful to me and shows me things that I need to improve on and strengths in my essay. My peer reader really liked my introduction and how it foreshadowed the rest of the draft. Fortunately, my peer review reader did not get confused during my essay and liked the organization and wording of my essay. My reader recommended that I add a few more paragraphs and use more quotations from my article readings.
The strong points in my essay are my introduction and the layout of the writing. The weak points of my essay are direct references to my readings. To help improve this, as I read my essay through I will add in quotes from the articles that strongly support the point I am portraying to my audience. When professor Benander reads my essay I predict that she will recommend more paragraphs for each point to help better explain each one.